How Much

poetry

How Much

 

How much do I love you?

I couldn't say

Do I love you as I love the warm sun basking upon my face?

I couldn't say

Is it a love that puts to shame all other loves?

I couldn't say

Perhaps it's a love that shakes the heavens?

I couldn't say

Or could it be a love so strong it brings tears to the eye?

I couldn't say

The type of love that fills you with a warmth that builds to a roaring fire?

I couldn't say

How much do I love you?

Words would not do it justice.

Sometimes all that can be said, all that can be felt,

lies within those three magical words.

I love you

That is all that matters

I love you

I want you

I need you

That I could easily say.

Author's Note

All reviews welcome. Just something I thought up while brainstorming.

Reviews

[Michael X]

pondering in perfect way, albert this a true contemplative work and takes the reader along
for the ride, the walk, the adventure through a landscape of emotions, its romantical in essence,
you capture certain ambience and rhythm, liken to a heartbeat, and its consistant pace,
skipping when excited, nice work here albeert you did a creative job, imaginative and passionate,
the form itself strikes me as artistic in nature, and really has design to the wording, beautiful

[shadadakiya]

very sweet but i couldn't say hugs

[Nely Amorim]

Beautiful words babe, always loving & thoughtful... only one thing :
The type of love that feels you with a warmth that builds to a roaring fire?
it should be "fills" you with a warmth... :)

I love you
I want you
I need you...
xxx

[waywithwords]

I wish that my brain stormed me into writing something so very beautiful my friend. I loved it. Annexxx The power indeed is those three short words. smiles. Annexxx