I will always love you
A Poem by Aldo kraas
That is an old poem
Written by Aldo Kraas 
Friend I will always love you For the things that You do for me Friend I appreciate It very much Friend We had been friends For a long time And I will do things To pay you back Friend Come with me To Good’s house Because you Need to meet Other religious people In the house of God We can’t forget to pray For each other And also God will answer Our prayer
© 2021 Aldo kraas
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After you filter out the repeated, and meaningless, use of “friend,” which does nothing, you have:
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Friend:
I will always love you for the things that you do for me. I appreciate it very much.
We had been friends for a long time, and I will do things to pay you back.
Come with me to Good’s house because you need to meet other religious people in the house of God.
We can’t forget to pray for each other. And also, God will answer our prayer
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“Good’s house? Obviously you didn’t bother to edit, or, spend any time saying anything meaningful.
This is, in a word: crap. But here you go: Since you definitively say that God will answer our prayers, I prayed that he’d send you endless amounts of gold. Is it there yet?
And before I forget: You claim to be from Canada. That has to be a lie. No one here writes that badly.
In disgust:
Spamalot
Posted 4 Years Ago
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Added on October 5, 2021
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Aldo kraasToronto, Ontario, Canada
About
i am Aldo Kraas
I been writing poems
For 25 years
In 2011 I self published
3 chapbooks more..
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