I will always love you

I will always love you

A Poem by Aldo kraas
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That is an old poem Written by Aldo Kraas

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Friend
I will always love you
For the things that
You do for me
Friend I appreciate
It very much
Friend
We had been friends
For a long time
And I will do things
To pay you back
Friend
Come with me
To Good’s house
Because you
Need to meet
Other religious people
In the house of God
We can’t forget to pray
For each other
And also God will answer
Our prayer

© 2021 Aldo kraas


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After you filter out the repeated, and meaningless, use of “friend,” which does nothing, you have:
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Friend:
I will always love you for the things that you do for me. I appreciate it very much.

We had been friends for a long time, and I will do things to pay you back.

Come with me to Good’s house because you need to meet other religious people in the house of God.

We can’t forget to pray for each other. And also, God will answer our prayer
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“Good’s house? Obviously you didn’t bother to edit, or, spend any time saying anything meaningful.

This is, in a word: crap. But here you go: Since you definitively say that God will answer our prayers, I prayed that he’d send you endless amounts of gold. Is it there yet?

And before I forget: You claim to be from Canada. That has to be a lie. No one here writes that badly.

In disgust:

Spamalot

Posted 4 Years Ago



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Aldo kraas
Aldo kraas

Toronto, Ontario, Canada



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i am Aldo Kraas I been writing poems For 25 years In 2011 I self published 3 chapbooks more..