Birds you make me so sad

Birds you make me so sad

A Poem by Aldo kraas
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That is a new poem Written by Aldo Kraas

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Birds you make me so sad
Every time you go away
For the winter
Migrating south
Father hurry up and bring
Spring because
I had enough of winter

© 2021 Aldo kraas


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Odd how birds should call up maternal thoughts while old man winter should be paternal. Odder still that your poem calls upon the father to cast himself away and call back the warmth of mother. Still more odd is that I want to suck my thumb now.

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Aldo kraas
Aldo kraas

Toronto, Ontario, Canada



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i am Aldo Kraas I been writing poems For 25 years In 2011 I self published 3 chapbooks more..