thought

i can't shake off

the thought

that you were 

so much more than

what you left me with

i think

that you killed your magic

on purpose 

Reviews

[Adam Adams]

Deep. Heartfelt, and quite realistic for sure. The value of love, and pain for it be well captured in these shortened words.

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Catch one moment and let all your life flowing through the words. Nicely done.

[Chris]

This one has real within it. There are a lot of echoes carried in your words - ends chosen and planned.