I Think I'm Evil

judge this one for yourself

Dizzy, dizzy, lips so sticky,

taste me, taste me, everything,

lover, lover, I'll be happy,

tell me, tell me anything,

you-you-you-you get softer every summer,

and I-I-I get darker every morning,

you-you-you-you feel the strangeness it's contagious,

I don't think that anyone can change us,

I think I'm evil now cause I wanted to sweat you out,

you make me paranoid but I love you, far out,

You make the sun go down but I sparkle in mine,

You should run with me cause running makes everything all right.

Author's Note

a very vague feeling I'm trying to portray.

Reviews

[Matching Socks]

I like it though I did find that second last line contradictory to the rest of the narrators lines.
Was it for the rhyme or does he/she really shine despite growing darker. Could be that they find energy in being in the light, open, not hiding... Anyway, I liked it.

[Dynafox]

That was more to show that she can make my world dark even though deep down I know I'm awesome. Thank you for your review. You're awesome

[Matching Socks]

Ha. Very good then.

[Dynafox]

lol thank you