The conviening of the Lords

a young dark skinned man walked down the dark halls coming to a large door, it's usual guards nowhere to be seen. The doors open for him as he walks inside bowing before a massive throne on top of a platform, "Still don't want your guards to see me lord Balient."

 

The demon lords of the Three sections of hell, the great movers and shakers of the demon world, are chosen through thier abilitys and attitude. Unlike human nobility, the Lords could have been a low class demon but because of his streangh and attitude, are more fit to rule over the weak higher class. While these cases are rare, such is the case of Lord Kiba. Lord Kiba is the youngest of the three demon lords and is also the most humane out of the three. Still a merciless b*****d, he kills only those he deemes worthy of it.Kiba is the most human looking of the bunch, with white hair and tanned skin. While both him and Soth look young and humanoid, Soths skin is the color blue and has 4 small horns coming up through the hair on his skull.The second oldest of the demon lords, Soth is part warrior part scientist. The third demon, by far the oldest, is Lord Beliant. He is what Humans believe to be the reaper, atleast in looks wise. He is nothing but bone now, and upon his skull sits his crown, wich proves his power over the largest section of the demon land.

Lord Beliant sits silently watching the other two argue over the problems that have arisen between rival factions under there control before finally stopping the two in order to get to the matter of the meeting

"My fellow lords, are plans are now in motion" he says in his raspy voice

"How is he doing, did he remember her from the picture?" Kiba asks

"So far the puppet is still bieng conrolled by the master" Beliant replys with a smile

"Masters, Beliant, do not forget that fact" Soth says staring at beliant

"yes yes, of course"

"'Why are we risking this exposure, when we could just as easily had sent chad to kill her father?" Kiba asks

"Even if her father died, the reaserch would continue, we have to force him to destroy ever bit of data he has, or all this would be pointless." Soth replies

"So why not just kidnapp her?"

" That is the backup plan. We want to destroy him. We want him to go insane and destroy his his own reaserch. Ofcourse if shes anything like her brother, she could be a powerfull ally in the times to come if we can kidnapp her and wipe her mind like we did chads"

Soths holds his head in his hands and goes into thought, coming out of it he says " infact for reaserch perposes she would be perfect, iv never had a child specimin. Beliant, i want her kidnapped not killed. The rewards outweigh the risks"

"What gives you the right to decide what the rewads are? i see no reason for her to live" Beliant replies his tone going from raspy to deep and commanding

"Because killing her will undoubtfully lead us to fighting Raz again" Soth says smiling

Frowning in anger Beliant shakes his head " That fool Angel, for bieng the Guardien of the earth hes doing a pisspoor job at it"

" Regardless of that fact, we both know you cant beat him in a fight."

At that comment Belient rises in a rage and leaves the room

" The old and there pride" Soth said smiling and shaking his head " Kiba, could you do me a favor and head down there, i want to make sure that she isnt killed"

"I will but ill want something in return"

"I have new powered Armour that iv been working on. I will let you have it when im finished"

"alright" Kiba says waving a hand and dissapearing into a portal that formed.

In the shadows of the war room, Soth begins to laugh as the portal completley dissapeares.

Not to far away

The demon lord sits there shrouded in the dark flames surrounding his throne. "I want you to keep an eye on the angel, make sure everything goes as I planned". He stands up floating down the stairs to the man placing a skeltal hand on his shoulder, "Don't fail me Noah." Balient removes his hand and walks back up to his throne .

Noah smirks rising from the floor whispering, "Yes, my lord." Before disappering from the room with great speed.

Reviews

[Rainbow Rider]

I like the premise of this book, but you need a little help with the actual phtsical writing part. The story line seems sound, but the writing {grammer, telling instead of letting the reader SEE, use oc Caps, etc, needs work.} But I truely like the premise ans storyline.