Never Love Again;

How could this day exist- I remembered you were mine,

It started with a kiss- Now your leaving me behind?,

Why?

What did I do to give you reason?,

You told me that you loved me- but the love was all deceiving!,

Tell me that you need me, or even that you miss me!,

Just don't come back tomorrow because your loving just might MISS ME.

 

Believe me when I say that I'm trying to move on,

Without you-Without me,

All I hear are love songs,

About you- about me,

I'm trying to stay strong.

For loving you i wont regret, For loving you i wont forget,

That loving you has made me think, The loving you that made me sink.

 

I'm glad it happened; my hearts stained rust,

Because of you- no love again I trust,

I hope your happy- and by the way,

The trust in you - made me this way.

Reviews

[Clara]

A heartbreaking write, Alexx.
I read and felt that I could relate to every line.
I think you captured the emotion perfectly.

It's sad how loving someone can turn us bitter and lose trust in what we gave our hearts to in the first place. Hugs to you.

[Nicole Williams]

oh. my. gosh.
I cant even say much because i have no idea how to critique poetry,
this moved me so much, I could relate to a lot of it.
especially "the trust in you - made me this way."
Your seriously talented.

[Jack Cassidy]

Really clever rhyme scheme. This seems like it could be made into a song. I really enjoyed the beginning too, it definitely set the mood. Well done.

[Vitalized Ego]

Alexx, you took the words out of my head. This is great. I can relate.