Estrella, Estrella

I didn't write this...

Your silence,

it's killing me, but 

I'm 

still

Breathing

You in like a drug, now 

 I'm dazed and

You just can't turn back 

right 

now.

 

Leaving

paths for a fool’s heart and

I’m crushed

like a glass under concrete

It’s too much

Don’t leave me here 

aching 

like 

this.

 

Falling

(...You’re not for me) but I’m

Waiting

Caressing your presence just

Caving

Into something I thought was 

Unsafe

You're my comfort in times like this.

 

Crazy

I can’t catch you now but I’m

     Chasing

Everything you are 

.....Please understand

What you are here

The clock’s spinning faster and

It’s not fair

Because I try and I try but I 

Can’t take my eyes off of you.

Author's Note

My subconscious did.

Reviews

[Sherwette]

woooooooow.... I love the way u make use of the italics, bold, spaces and everything. How the words feels like come out of the heart but still is reluctant to be said. I love it.

[Vinod Kumar U K]

Strong basement and strong will before the love, nice poem.....

[Gitana Deneff]

i like the font changes. very emotive.

[Sarah E. Pearson]

I love the structure of this. It has a great flow and a deep message. Great write.

[Tkess]

I like the structure of this. It captures a love/hate relationship perfectly.

[joshua deathdealer]

Very clever and deep write. I really enjoyed it..xx

[Enigma]

Your subconscious is talented. :D Well penned.

[Beaner166]

I love this. Beautiful write. Absolutely amazing.

[Lily Mae]

I love this and the Author's note is perfect.. :)xx

[marielondon]

Beautiful as usual!