Life is Strange

Aspiring

While spiraling

Living life

Yet dying

Hoping much

Still crying

Giving up

But trying

Losing all

While finding

Hating life

Neverminding

Being bored

No time again

Have it all

Yet striving

Falling short

And thriving

Ups and downs

Life is strange

Smiles and frowns

Joy through pain

I have it all

I have nothing

Chaos surrounds

To peace, I cling

Life is a blur

To be seen ever clearly

Treasure your time

Before filling the empty

Reviews

[Green]

Life is full of contradictions and the craziest part of it all is, sometimes they are both true and it’s not a contradiction at all. It’s like some sort of paradox. I love how you paired all the opposites together in this, really made that seem even more true.

[Alicia-Veracity]

So true. Thank you for the review! I appreciate you taking the time to read this. =)

[damienf]

This is more than basic juxtaposition for its own sake. Even though every word, every contrast is a simple word / concept, it's clear you've thought hard - the emotion shows. Nice :-)

[Alicia-Veracity]

Thank you! I appreciate the review. It means alot that you took the time to both read this and give me some feedback. =)

[Buddhistboy73]

mmm.... a real rollercoaster of emotions here...:)

Chaos surrounds, to peace I cling......

I guess we all go through these emotions sometimes....I like the line
"Treasure your time"......as you never know what's around the corner...

Feel free to stop by and check out one of my latest poems...:)

BB73

[Alicia-Veracity]

Thank you for the review! I appreciate you taking the time to read this! I definitely will try to check out some of your work when I have the chance. =)