my hair is gray, my personality is too.

A poem from a while ago. I'm not really a poet, but occasionally I try.

Like the ichor of the gods dripping from your lips, these bottled, lonely, spirits course through my veins.

I am small, just a child with a soft voice, and brittle bones,
I keep to the darkness, only mysterious in my silence, stemming from the fear of my own voice. 

You are the darkness in which I find comfort. You are fierce, steel, cold and cynical. Your voice is raspy and enticing, without a hint of remorse for the space it occupies.

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I think you spoke a lot from the inside about what you feel how you feel. Only thing I disagree with is the darkness of life. I have seen the darkness within my own I know what it can create over time. It took me a long time to voice the inner steps and to face a fear, but when I did I became a better person for me no1 else. Today life is still in a circular motion but comes with deep understand and meditation to void the things that keep one within still.

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I like it! :