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A Poem by Alien

Drunk poetry yayyy

You're star studded and glowing bright
I'm sinking dark and holding tight
you have no cares and float in bliss
I can't sigh without a hiss.

© 2016 Alien

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Suhd	Dark filled with mystery and envy! Good write. Posted 8 Years Ago Dark filled with mystery and envy! Good write. Rating /100

mercy party

one could make the case that this poem is about a TV.

Posted 8 Years Ago

Lorry

Again, you kill it with the last line, which says so much more than the sum of its parts. The more we see beauty and light in others, the more we see our own failings magnified in our self, whether real or imagined, sober or drunk. Nicely captured.

Posted 9 Years Ago

Darkswing

That's a beautiful poem!!! Good work

Posted 9 Years Ago

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Added on November 20, 2016
Last Updated on November 20, 2016

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I'm not really a writer, just bored. I never finish anything, but I figured feedback on what little I do write couldn't hurt. I don't know how to respond to compliments, so just know they're appre.. more..