happy little thoughts
A Poem by Alien
you can fly... 
you swallow glass tocleanse your insidesand make room forclear cut crystals. holding hope outin a dish for moremore high flyingdeath defying pixie dust.
© 2017 Alien
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Quite a dope little snippet of rhyme. If you NEED criticism... Then I would say tighten up the lines a bit, as in... Maybe rhyming Insides with "X" word to tie up the line, and so on... Otherwise well done. Nicely penned...
Posted 8 Years Ago
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Added on February 27, 2017
Last Updated on February 27, 2017
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AlienMT
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I'm not really a writer, just bored. I never finish anything, but I figured feedback on what little I do write couldn't hurt.
I don't know how to respond to compliments, so just know they're appre.. more..
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