None

A Poem by Alien

None

hold my heart between your teeth, and squeeze until I know
that love is dumb and blind and feral, and sappy gooey sentiment
is only present in the blood it spills.

© 2017 Alien

My Review

Would you like to review this Poem?
Login | Register

Reviews

This is stark. Interesting how you used "hold" as my expectation is of hands. Sappy gooey sentiment is good metaphor. Like I said; stark.

Posted 8 Years Ago

Poetic Beauty

Love isn't always perfect. It can be beautiful or it can be like walking on broken glass. This shows that thought clearly.

Posted 8 Years Ago

Stats

178 Views
3 Reviews
Added on July 17, 2017
Last Updated on July 17, 2017

Author

Alien

MT

About

I'm not really a writer, just bored. I never finish anything, but I figured feedback on what little I do write couldn't hurt. I don't know how to respond to compliments, so just know they're appre.. more..