Dream zymosis

What if your soul mate could be only visible through dreams ? Well Delirio met Crystal just by closing his dreamy eyes...

It was 2034. when Crystal joined me.  You could describe her as a revived porcelain mamushka. You could never pass surprise while watching her on the tribune speaking to the mass of rusty genetic hopes.  

My  corpus amygdaloideum was always mercilessly to me. I can recall everything back. Every word, every gleam.

"Blur dominoes are reflecting the galactic nexus between the ground and my compassion to confess the plagiaristic truth about my being. I confess that my kingdom will recreate a new existential spirit. Our perception will be magenta. Our list of fallen sparkles is interminable. The only thing we need to do is drop lemons on the enthusiasm of pale mantras.  My thoughts are  scratched LPs. They only play the melody of somnolent neigh. May the seams on your straitjacket never crack if you ever revenge my eyeballs again." 

Her kingdom was the bookshelf full of rectagular jesters. She has never lost the hope that the right baloon will touch your wrist and bring you to the immeasurable height that the jesters could bring you to. I loved the way she whispers faith in to the ulterior auricles. If I could only erase the side affect of being dreamy eyed and catch her before the last petal of tangibility shows up.

Reviews

[Einstein Noodle]

i always enjoy when poetry has science woven within ..this is so wildly creative .. third line should me merciless instead of mercilessly .. if you want correct syntax that is .. not a big deal .. "Blur dominoes...." fantastic phrase that ignites my mental picturing ... so many inspirational visuals ..too many to applaud them all ..but one more i have to mention is "...Our list of fallen sparkles..." love that!!! i wonder why you didn't use "almonds" in some way having mentioned the ol' "corpus amygdaloideum" :) read it twice and it just gets better ..lots of room for an expanded story
E.

[Jeannette Lunete]

Thank you :)

[MerylDivya]

This is very creative. I have to reread everything to absorb the words. I'm not sure I can grasp the meaning but the fact that I know it's a little beyond me makes me want to read more. Very interesting style.

[Jeannette Lunete]

Thank you very much for the review Divya. I appreciate it. :)

[Coyote Poetry]

I love how you write. I would buy your book. Your short story are amazing. Filled with mystery and wondrous places. You create strong characters and places for the reader to fall into.
"Blur dominoes are reflecting the galactic nexus between the ground and my compassion to confess the plagiaristic truth about my being. I confess that my kingdom will recreate a new existential spirit."
Thank you for sharing the amazing story. Above lines left me with good vision and thoughts to ponder.
Coyote

[Jeannette Lunete]

Thanks Coyote! Your reviews are very inspiring and encouraging.
It is an enormous honor for a young writer like me to see this magnificent spirit in the reader's mind. :)

[ANM]

We all need dreams quirky and compelling I want to see more!

[Jeannette Lunete]

I will do my best to offer more armies of dreamers :)

[ANM]

We all dream dreams.....