To be or... whatever

I bought my first frustration in front of a white clock with hands that avoid transience. 

Lukewarm stimulus was shaking my salto into the random. Swinging the husky voice out of my fragile repertory of verbal mutants. 

I would run over the monticule of bad excuses while I shouted out my cinnamon breath shaped into a cynical response: "So what?" Over and over again... 

The white Persian cat you called Cloudy died. 

So what?  Now she's at least where she belongs..in the sky.

Pluton is not a planet anymore.

 So what? A silent "not" is there anyway in his name if you read it backwards...

Flower wreaths are joining graves not heads anymore. 

So what? At least it goes back to the roots.

People seem to get suicidal over blue letters of ignorance. 

So what? At least they create a nice violet plash while massing with the red. 

Apathy seems to become remediless. 

So what? My tongue will live forever.

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

"I would run over the monticule of bad excuses while I shouted out my cinnamon breath shaped into a cynical response: "So what?" Over and over again... "
This is my kind of poetry. Testing ground and thoughts. The story is direct and honest. Not a poem that is filled with rosy and contentment. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Jeannette Lunete]

Thanks a lot Coyote for reading and reviewing. I'm glad that you enjoyed. :)
Well it's never rosy around my subconscious so it kinda reflects the true colours...

[Coyote Poetry]

It did. A amazing poem.

[Zakari Schmidt]

This poem flows like a like a stream..your words capture every ripple in the water, reflecting an ascended consciousness, glowing for me tonight. Beautiful poem Jeannette!

[Jeannette Lunete]

Thanks a lot Zachary for reading and reviewing. It means a lot to me. :)

[AprilRN1210]

this is thought-provoking and powerful.. the ending hits you.. you get lost in the random stream of consciousness and vivid imagery.. the emotion reaches out and grabs the reader.. well done my friend..

[Jeannette Lunete]

Thanks a lot April. I'm glad that you enjoyed it. I appreciate it a lot. :)

[ANM]

Powerful words beautifully put together in a fresh way!

[Jeannette Lunete]

Thanks a lot ANM for reading and reviewing. I appreciate it a lot. :)

[ANM]

You are very welcome!

[Tina Kline]

Impressive piece of writing. It does have a powerful impact.

[Jeannette Lunete]

Thanks for the review. I appreciate it.

[Tina Kline]

You're welcome.

[Lydia Shutter]

Stream of consciousness writing. Thought provoking and intriguing. Lydi*

[Jeannette Lunete]

Thank you Lydi. I appreciate it.

[stars are far]

that was good jo here. well done

[Jeannette Lunete]

Thanks, for reading. I appreciate it.

[Rene Salinas]

The tone of the writing is defiant as Jeannette kindly opens the doors to her intriguing enigma and alluring conceptualism. Defiant might be but I always feel welcome in this corridors of chameleons which is the nature of her inner images. Here is the writing gets my full attention. The So what here is not disrespectful is not inconsiderate it is a response indeed to the realazation that what knocks at our doors right here right now is not whatwe want but hey I will listen yet that doesn't mean I need to obbey those midnless games. Insteas Jeanette has her own journey. Listening to her own truths. Trying to stick up to what she belives is a way "forward" but not asleep, not unconcious and certainly not harmful.

So what ? If you are not popular with the "in" crowd Jeannette. You will always have a place in my group with the nerds.

Thankyou

[Jeannette Lunete]

Well, thanks Rene for this defiant review. You always cheer me up. :)

[CaValla503]

Ultra deep an intriguing.

[Jeannette Lunete]

Well, thanks for reading. I appreciate it.