Surviving tsunami!!

Power or nature can defeat anything

The first thing I felt while I was standing, was that horrible, dead, unending silence. It seemed like a death party. it was as id everyone had ;ost their ability to do anything. The weather was very cold and scary.

 

I decided to go back home, but human being,  they are such weird creatures. I stayed. My legs were freezing, my lips were purple, and I saw a big devasting, enormous wave coming toward us, I screamed and ran away. Luckily nothing bad happened. Those 10 minutes, were a nightmare.

Reviews

[Alakz]

Hi...
No, not really. It's just an assignment our teacher asked us to do, a paragraph about facing a tsunami, and I copied it here ^^.
Thanks

[Sara]

this is full of great, powerful imagery! have you actually experienced a tsunami before?
that would be very scary.
if this is a true story, then i'm glad you are safe now!
-sara :-)