Swinging

This is about swinging on a swing set, just to clarify any confusion.

High above the rest I fly

I kick my legs to reach the sky

Wind finds its way through my hair

Imagination relive me of all my cares

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Zoya]

I love swinging! That's one of the times when I forget about everything other thing in this world and become a kid once again, kicking hard at the ground to reach the zenith.
A nostalgic, jovial write! Really liked it!

[AllauraRose]

Thanks! I'm glad you liked it!

[Zoya]

No worries

[H L Rose]

I like the simple idea portrayed in a short simply way. The first two lines sound wonderful together and the last two lines are absolutely beautiful in sentiment. I will say that I think the "The" and "My" that start off each of the last two lines could be taken out. Also I think there is a typo with "relives" and it should be "relieve".

I really do love this. Swinging is sooooo underrated. Much enjoyed!

[AllauraRose]

Thanks! I will fix it, so thanks for pointing it out.

[H L Rose]

Glad I could help!