One.

"Scorched by winter’s wrath
I lay still in the night
This winter’s choking embrace
Leaves me with no will to fight"

 

^{I give in;} I give up; _{I surrender.}

 

I’m burning. I’m suffocating. I’m freezing. I'm paralyzed with death's lips nearly against mine. 

 

I’m done. I give up. Take me. Take me now. The pain, the cold, will end.

 

Death is me. I am death. We are one. Winter is death. I am winter. Winter is here. Winter is there. I lay here dying and winter approaches.

 

The cold is surrounding me. I can’t see light. I can’t hear. I can only feel this. I feel this cold. I feel death. I feel winter.

 

^{I give in;} I give up; _{I surrender.}

 

Author's Note

It's short, but I like it best this way. When I wrote out more it just strayed from the path that the song takes.

Reviews

[tasha armstrong.]

Nicely written.
That's all.

xoxo, t.

[Jessica R.]

This is amazing. It's.. I can't even think of intelligent words to describe this. It's so honest-- it doesn't try to hide the meaning. It's written to the point, and the format is just right for the way you wrote it. Can't wait to read more of it. =)