Hatred Veins

I hate you!

You naive, back-stabbing b***h!

I hope you choke

on someone's dick.

Hatred flows through my veins

just for you.

You better run

before I come for you.

I'm gonna gut you

and watch you bleed.

Why did you have to

f**k with me?

I'm the wrong person,

didn't you see?

You were my best friend

and you really hurt me...

I f*****g hate you...

I f*****g miss you...

You f*****g son of a b***h.

F**k you! F**k me!

Why...why did you make me leave?

Author's Note

God, I hate her.

Reviews

[Art Sun]

Dang...now that's some interior release of explosive anger...don't want to really get you mad...

just kidding...

[dustyhowls]

Okay, so many people who use this amount of profanity in their writing manage too mess it up pretty badly. Not you though. This is a great poem; it has flow, rhythm, and PASSION.

[talulu love]

WOW!!!!! umm....i guess ur mad...heheheh...but yea its so strong and expressive....I dont wanna mess with you....hehehehehe...good job...keep it up