To Forget

Shadows, slip into the vacant sky.

Brutal images cloud my mind.

Broken dreams, but never pride.

Reflections, of a memory disguised.

As a moment of peace as I strive.

To forget.

Reviews

[Matt]

This is really good man. keep it up.

[Holly]

I still think you'd be great for lyrics, bonita muy muy!

[odhiambo]

powerful.if only we can truly forget.

[Sexy P3nguin]

It's amazing how you can fit so much detail in such a short peice.
'Great job

[Pepsimax]

i applaused your poem after reading, seriously stood at my laptop and clapped :P.
Really an amazing first line, shadows slip into the vacant sky, thats imprinted on my mind.

[LeeLee Ryder]

Simply beau-ti-ful... Love the beginning line ...oh hell
love the whole thing... O yeah.. "reflections, of a memory disguised"
Brilliant... To forget is divine...
thanks for not forgetting to share
LeeLee