Such Healing

Written: September 13th, 2009. 1:36a.m.

Eyes observe appearances,
The outside of me,
But gaze into these hazel depths,
And the truth is what you'll see.

Hands trace every outline,
While underneath remains untouched,
Touch me tender, I ask of you,
The places where I need it so much.

Lips caress the edges of the past,
That is forever embedded in this skin,
Tongues press lightly against,
The pain that lies within.

Ragged breaths and moans,
This torcher forces me to make,
Goosebumps rise, chills down my spine,
Almost too much to take.

Movements become more desperate,
Bodies now in sync,
So much at once, incredible,
Pleasure to feel, nothing to think.

Temporarily everything just stops,
Time seeming to slip by,
Momentarily thoughts are slowed to a hault,
Such healing from this medicine, this rush, this high.

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[Bubo]

Hands trace every outline,
While underneath remains untouched,
Touch me tender, I ask of you,
The places where I need it so much.

A lovely powerful write on a subject of making love that can feel like a healing, and I think we become touched inside, making us feel whole when we are loved in a special way, by a special person........this piece was pleasantly erotic with tenderness and a feeling of hope.
I liked reading it very much.