This Feeling I Cant Take No More

Even if she broke me heart I cant stop thinkin about her.

A quaking thunder,

A roaring pound.

Thats my heart when you are around.

Reviews

[Pax]

i like it...
short and lovely

[S. Michael Long]

LOVE IT!, im a sucker for short and sweet powerful words, and this fits the bill bar none! nice work! -s

[LisetteCanWrite!]

Awww.. Short but full of life and love.. this said a whole lot in so very few words. Good rhyme and flow..