fingered fate

windy thoughts are being
fingered by faraway fates


this book, it has been
tortured by smears of neglect


bending and turning what
has been only recent me


poor, mistreated, twisted me
the book laughs at my life, as the scythe-bearer does


a life as me, or my loved one, he asks
i am the one who laughs; loved?


i am hate warmed up
the Devil shat me out and molded me to a cozy fire


he penetrated me with easy nudge
dripping with cold and harsh intentions, the stench


it sails through the air and kisses the dust
on the knife that shaped my clitoris


to enjoy what i enjoy
to enjoy what i endure


this is who i will be
and he leaves my fingered


thoughts to be
to be me
and only me.

Reviews

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Pretty strong stufff! Loved the passages:

he penetrated me with easy nudge
dripping with cold and harsh intentions, the stench


it sails through the air and kisses the dust
on the knife that shaped my clitoris

Very expressive use of provokative phases

[Alpris]

Thank you, John :) I appreciate your kind words

[Ufi Auttorri ~ Amy C. T..]

As you say in your bio, you are a serious writer. This piece... strong and twisted ... humor me, please. What's the significance of the shatting Devil?

[Alpris]

I like to refer to excrement as what it is; waste. In this poem I was playing a wasted soul that the devil moulded to his advantage Thank you though; very kind words.

[Ufi Auttorri ~ Amy C. T. Serrat]

Ah, that helps. Thank you. I look forward to reading more of your work.

[Alpris]

No problem at all :) Thank you, I will be reading some of your work, too

[afra]

excellent write ....good job

[Alpris]

Thank you, dear :)

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

dark, thought provoking poetry......loved it

[Alpris]

Thank you very much!

[Junert]

Nice.

[Alpris]

Thank you :)

[Pól]

Brilliant imagery- almost painful, had to cross my legs once.