teased

tease the dirt
 with affectionate leather toe kiss
watch out for the roots - SQUASH THEM!
they might strangle the doll
       the doll... so beautifully intricate
   woven by an angel's stitch of short-lived pleasure
she is really just a doll,
   her face was and is still porcelain slapped
        as her hair is still dark as the rain      raped         mud


tease the dirt, go on
     put the doll back where she belongs ; in
mother nature's gaping, weeded C**T!
mother-me, i love this doll
   i had her for seven years before i got sick
and she got ...teased
    she liked to play ; she just didn't admit it aloud
put the doll in, sweetie
                           eeeasssssyyyyyyy does it
don't dally, now;
    there will be plenty more dolls at the fair
they cost only a night and a half
           
 

Reviews

[New Dawn]

Wow - both sinister and deep - loved it

[Kaa Na Kalyanasundaram]

Great. Your writing brings more picturised meaning. Best wishes.

[Kyle]

Very intense...... full of multiple meanings. The picture used here was perfect....you are a riveting writer.

[Stanley Wilson]

oooh lots of things going on great poem