autumn's birth

deep breeze

peninsula's gush of earth

her hair caught at her teeth
                                              as she smiled

we embraced beneath autumn's birth


and i could not breathe less

than waterfall crumble and canyon kiss

as we           kissed

her lips glided the rich mahogany

rouge of my lips

chandelier crystals
    afloat the creek's pores, they were ;
we               punished them

splashed together in slick bareness

tangles of seaweed padded
                                  our
                                      fall.

then did she bore her eyes into mine

this very autumn, i fell.

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[Acer]

we embraced beneath autumn's birth


and i could not breathe less
than waterfall crumble and canyon kiss
as we kissed
her lips glided the rich mahogany
rouge of my lips
chandelier crystals
afloat the creek's pores, they were ;
we punished them
splashed together in slick bareness
tangles of seaweed padded
our
fall...............

powerful words, only these stanza makes your poem complete indeed. well written, lovely write. loved to read.