A Collection of my Haikus (Part 1)

I'm new to Haiku, just experimenting here.

1) No one knows at all

this girl eats watermelons

swallow those juices

2) Save me the worry

she does not cum home to me

lay out the doormat 

3) Hot red cardigan

a creamy, breasted cuddle

wet, pink; winter soup

4) Winter seduces

erected goosebumps unarmed

I'll let her moan heat

5) Wet, white submission

a fingered dream releases

the snow does not bow

6) Steel gate fence

smelling

vapourized passion

7) One girl and a wall

someone comes out

door creaks




8) Midler fiddler, HA!

I like to dream so f**k off

God gave us a mind

Reviews

[Clockwork]

I think the first one is my favorite, although I am a fan of the third one as well. I like your modern twist on this ancient form.

[Michael G.]

Very enjoyable. I enjoy your work her. You write with a passion.