Smoking is S**T

Wrote this while I was smoking.

my lit cigarette:


the circular embered end


looks like


an a*****e



and it makes me laugh


as I slide the


butt into my mouth


and blow out


the s**t I sucked out of it

         crusts             

                          tumble 

                                                 off 

                                                              the 

                                                                        end



I've been an a*s licker,


a*s kisser


for three years now


and counting;



I'm sick of this crap



but i really am



a sucker for bullshit

Reviews

[Michael G.]

Makes me laugh also.
From one who smoked for over forty years, (as much a three packs a day) and got off of them. (Chantix works!) I'm not one to say stop smoking... that's your choice. I will say you put smoking in a whole new context.
This is a good flowing thought.

[Flo_writer]

You gave me a new way to look at smoking here I never really thought of before. Not sure I wanted that visual but I still smiled and thought it was interesting. This is very creative and your words and full of visual. I can tell you have a vivid imagination. well done.

[Clockwork]

It makes me laugh too. I never though about cigarettes in that way. I think it is a great way to make a sometimes frustrating subject into something light and funny.