About Out

One girl and a wall

she comes out, it's expected

and the door groans light

Reviews

[Owlgirl]

Spectacular hiaku! There are so many different ways of interpreting and imagining this poem its amazing! I'm sitting here just thinking up different stories about the girl, I'm not sure if you had one, but if you do I'd love to read it! Simply amazing. I love it!

[Cree Nations]

Powerful words in such a short verse.

[Mark]

Reminds me of a childbirth

[An owl on the moon]

You create a world of what was and what is, all in three hushed-brief lines... It feels like a freedom and a binding all at once... Beautifully done.

[Liderien]

I feel like you want to say more here, but the brevity is still the statement you feel needs to be made. She is a brave one. good write

[Kaa Na Kalyanasundaram]

The sad sound from the door reflects the pain or unhappiness of the girl. It's beautiful ! I like this three line modern haiku. My best wishes.