Winter pt. 4

Green steel gate fences

smelling vaporized passion

wrapped in melted ice

Reviews

[Clockwork]

I can only imagine that night must have been filled with magic. I like the idea of that old gate. It seems well worn and I can imagine it being copper or bronze and turning green with age. Maybe that is just my association, but I really like the scene you painted here, even if the element of passion is cryptic.

[joshua deathdealer]

The green gate was beautiful amongst the melting snow. Nice work on this steamy series.

[Alpris]

Ah yes, it's really more of an inside reference, but thank you for reviewing and commenting!

[Dream Hunter]

this haiku is interesting, though i must admit that i didn't fully understand it. still, it was pretty! :)