I wanted to write a poem

See title

I wanted to write a poem

But I couldn't

Writing poems is bad,

I KNEW THAT I SHOULDN'T

 

But a few minutes later

My thought pattern was straighter,

and no longer did I think that I wouldn't

Author's Note

Judge this as harshly as possible. I want to feel guilty for writing this

Reviews

[Holly Mason]

but then you did
or did you
maybe you will maybe you won't
interesting and kinda cute in a way
but it left me wanting to know-
why writing poems is bad?*)
I am not a good guilt maker-got fired in 92' hahhaa
thank you for sharing

[alter]

The intent of this poem was to ease up some tension from the last article I had written. All in all, it left me and my co-workers in a better mood and for that I am thankful. Your poetry is very good but I have seen it tend more towards the serious side so I challenge you thusly: write a poem that makes you and your friends laugh!
So whimsical a writer you may be will you share thoughts of satire and...dare I say it....comedy? If this is not a style that you often write in or feel comfortable writing in I understand. I will write a review fro one of your poems in a few minutes :D
Jon

[Holly Mason]

well the check out what I just slapped up for the feature
I write all different some even styled like advertisements ...*)
and I am not worried about a review back..not my style truly
but have to tell ya...the alter name just grabbed me