The vampires.

 

The vampires marched forward to kill me,

Their beauty especially flagrant.

Their leader bared a grin,

Looking extremely sadistic.

I shivered as a natural response,

As if somebody had put ice down my pants.

They came to a halt in front of me,

And I cowered in fear,

And that’s all I remember of my former life,

For I had become their meal.

Author's Note

Critique?

Reviews

[Bella Rave]

It's nice but not all vampires kill!

[Jetta Zippora]

I love it! I think short poems are the best, and you really know how to get a message across in only a few lines. Great job! :)

[Mandalynn]

i like it. short but discriptive. kudos!

[witchiekatez]

this is simple yet pretty.

[anneliese]

i thought this was good. i am also a major fan myself. can i saw that i like the kinda scary/evil/demented ending? usually i dont go for that but this was cool.

[Egan]

i love this it reminds me of twilight. I love the books!!! the movie is good too :)