Emergency.

 

Its an emergency,

My heart has stopped beating,

I cannot breathe.

He left me in this state;

In this way.

And now I am going to die.

I cant get him out of my head,

So I can die peacefully.

He is all I see,

My life flashing before my eyes.
He was my life.

 

Author's Note

Critique?

Reviews

[Hotaru Miyuki]

ome i love this. you expressed very well in this.

[We are young.]

This is very unique, and I really like the emotion that seems to be spilliing over the works of your masterpiece. good job

[Jetta Zippora]

Man! You write with so much feeling, and that's how poetry should be written. What's there to critique? You're writing with your heart! How can one critique another's heart? Beautiful write!

[Charisma Moonfairy]

Wow and more wow. To have someone become your life, not the reason you live but to become your life then just walk away as though it were nothing is the hardest thing in the world. This is amazing to read and you should be proud of yourself for putting out such works