I needed you.

 

I needed you,

But you never showed.

I counted on you,

But you never turned up.

I leaned on you,

But you pushed me away.

I opened up to you,

But you never cared.

I loved you,

But you never loved me.

Author's Note

Inspired by 'Never Alone - Barlow Girl'
Critique?

Reviews

[tomboy]

I enjoyed it. Once again, the simplicity of your poems a strong feature that brings it all together.

[Caleb Benton]

Short and to the point. Nice.

[**Cullenified77]

i love this poem!
its so straight up and to the point
it describes the writers feelings perfectly and the whole thing flows together beautifully
great work :)