Pain.

A Poem by Aly

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Pain.

Such a terrible thing,

But also so very wonderful.

Addictive.

A drug.

Im hooked.

Hooked on this substance that frees me from reality.

Pain-

Life.

© 2009 Aly

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Brandon Lee

Too cliche. Sorry. Honesty hurts but it helps in the end. Too short as well. Whats so good about it? What does it do for you etc etc.

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Posted 17 Years Ago

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Added on February 22, 2009

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Aly

Brisbane, Australia

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Im Aly. Im awesome. Im in grade eight. I love my friends ♥ Jacula Jordan ♥ 6 Months ♥ Im gonna miss everybody from primary so much :( I love you guys ♥ Kthx.. more..