HAIKU- Weather.

 

Trees rustle wildly

Swaying in the winter wind

Dancing with themselves

 

Clouds cover the sky

Trapping us in a dark place

Turning the sky grey

 

Rain falls from the sky

Pouring down on us below

Drowning all the plants

 

The sun emerges

Cleaning up all the damage

Revealing beauty

Author's Note

Critique?

Reviews

[Sarah Hawkinson]

Very sweet poem. More like a collection of haikus but you pulled it off well, it's hard to stick to a specific syllable limit. Great job!