A Painful Memory

A Painful Memory

A Poem by Alzalaus
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enjoy My Suffering. It All Turns Into Something Beutiful When Its Written Down. Doesnt It? -smiles slightly- Enjoy.

"

Tears, Tears

Falling To The Floor

I Didnt Think I Would Bear It Anymore.

       

Stopped Quickly

Clenched Teeth, Tight Fist

I Spit.

      

Walked Away Slowly,

Limping Again,

Can't Feel Myself.

      

World Got Dizzy,

Couldnt See Straight,

Passed Out And Woke Somewhere Else.

      

Straight Cold Stare,

Unblinkingly Silent,

This Wasnt Me, So Who Was It?

      

Going By Without Hesitation,

No One Can See The Truth,

...... Unless They Looked Me In The Eyes.

      

The Pain Has Swelled,

All Of It Unleashed,

So What Now? Ill Just Go To Sleep.

      

Awoke Happy,

Thought It Was A Dream,

I Was Sadly Mistaken.....

© 2008 Alzalaus


Author's Note

Alzalaus
A Person's Pain Is Always Beutiful For Some Reason When Written Down. If You Only Knew What Happened Then You Could See More Then Words And A Mental Picture.

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Hmm...I am curious. Sometimes you fail to reveal enough. I read again, looking for clues...they are well-hidden

Posted 17 Years Ago


I thought this was amazing. I felt so flustered as i was reading this, like I was living it. I felt the almost confusion of the character as he lived out this quick nightmare.


Great Job! :-D

Posted 17 Years Ago


Pain makes the best poems, Don...I have only that to thank you for.

Posted 17 Years Ago



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Added on April 16, 2008

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Alzalaus
Alzalaus

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When you're faced with impending doom and the world is on fire all around you, make art and make it loudly! My name is Don. And I live within every one of you. Message me if you want to contact.. more..