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A Poem by Alzalaus
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Boredness With A Twist

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Life in a fast lane

living on the chocolate plane

Looking around for a colored wheel

So I Can go to movies peel

Life in a fast lane

living on the riot plane

moving here and there

making life seem like a blare

colors are quick and speed is still

quickly moving like a snail

bunny sleeping on the rail

thinking he has won

but in this irational reality

The Bird Has Lost

And the Worm Has Won

© 2008 Alzalaus


Author's Note

Alzalaus
No Clue What The hell I Wrote. ENJOY!!!

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You Think So Mockingbird? Interesting. Well, I Feel Glad To Know That My Short Hyper-Active Poem Can be Compared To That Of A Great Personality Inducing Game Such As Fable. :P I Think My Day Has Been made A Little Brighter Now. XD

Posted 13 Years Ago


reminds me of a fable. there is a lesson to be learned here. the verses bring to mind how someone talks when they are manic : ) great job.

Posted 13 Years Ago


I like bunny sleeping on a rail.....it is nice to see you write about yourself...The bird has lost and the worm has won is another great line!

Posted 17 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on November 14, 2008

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Alzalaus
Alzalaus

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When you're faced with impending doom and the world is on fire all around you, make art and make it loudly! My name is Don. And I live within every one of you. Message me if you want to contact.. more..