Boom!

How Things Are Appearing As Of Late...

Life is a funny thing.
You live,
You Die,
And all the while trying to survive.
Yet, if you get right down to it.......
We all really wanna die.......
See people live so that they die,
And they die to make way for the next generation.
If we really wanted to live, We would off our offspring.
Things may get messy, but sure enough.......
Something would keep us all alive.....

Author's Note

This isn't one of my better pieces. But I Have To get Back Into The Practice Somehow. XD This Is More Of An Opinion Rather A Poem. So Critique Kindly Please! Lol

Reviews

[Alzalaus]

Thank You Mockingbird. Though I Will Admit, This Is Actually One Of My Morning Stuper Kind Of Poems. Not Very Well thought Out. Even More Poorly Written. But I Thank You Regardless!

[Mockingbird]

interesting...i guess love would keep people alive (that' what they all say). luckily i have no offspring to off. but some people have a plan for when they go. eventually. very weird and thought-provoking poem.