Night Sky

Moon up in the air so high

Placed against a darkened sky

Stars scattered, glittering through

Illuminating places you thought you knew

Places change and morph in the night

Hiding things in your plain sight

Streams sparkle

Creatures crawl

Things you never knew existed at all

Silence creaks

As nightingale speaks

And here I am staring

And falling asleep

Reviews

[Alex Caine]

*sighs in rapture*
This is such an expressive, beautiful piece. Have you ever done any writing courses? So far your writing seems to say you should have years of experience and skill...I absolutely love this poem. Just to point out one little thing you might want to change..."nightengale" is actually spelled nightingale...just so you know. Otherwise, this is a wonderful poem with so much feeling, imagery, and descriptions. Great job :)