Mr. Magee

 

Away, away in a boat on the sea

Lives a little old man by the name of Mr. Magee

He sits and he fishes all the day long

Sitting and singing his old sailor songs

Of Bonnie who lives out over the sea

Hoping someone would bring his Bonnie to thee

And of rowing boats

And gentle streams

Sings little contented

Mr. Magee

Reviews

[Banished]

aww poor old man...
his bonnie lies over the ocean lol

i really enjoyed reading this poem. it flowed well, it was unique and it made me smile. if a poem makes me smile, then it must be good =]

keep up the good work

[Alex Caine]

Great write! It's very rhythmic with a fabulous rhyme scheme. It seems to have a bit of a whimsical tone to it that I absolutely love. Fantastic job, I hope you keep writing :)
-Alex