Open Your Eyes

Bright colors,
No, dark colors,
Yellow, orange, red,
A trace of brown,

Flickering,
Faltering,
Fading away,

Patterns skit across your vision,
Try to focus on an image,
Try to make sense of what you see,
And it's gone.

Fetching,
Fleeting,
Fading away,

You forget the colors,
You drift deeper,
You catch yourself falling,
And at last,

You open your eyes and it's gone.

Reviews

[Jamestown]

I think this is so creative, cool poem, thx for sharing.