Find The Man, Find The Breeze

Self reflection and realization

I walk around the Corner Break
And meet the crossroads where i stand
I see the earth, i see the trees, I hear the sound of misty breeze
But word of mouth says find the man.


I find the man, he finds a way
To dissipoint my hopeful plans
He waits until the bitter end,last time, and place, he calls me friend
and shoots me down like foil cans

But I wont crawl, I only walk
And I wont drown, I only swim
And when Im struck, I strike you back
You want to leave, i'll help you pack
Because I see the earth, I see the trees, I always listen for the breeze
I own control of my mind's ease.

Author's Note

Sorry for any errors in grammer. I wanted to know if the poem itself is too confusing for the simplicity in it's message, or if it is pretty self explanatory.

Reviews

[frogbean]

yea dude i think that it is a very confuzing peice. i didnt understand it almost at all. your gramatical errors are minor when compared with this peice. but i tried really hard to get sumthing out of this and well i got that you were posibly hurt or sick and have overcome some big obstical in life. and you were verry stron throught it all. if it was only a tad bit more organized and it seemed like you tried to cram so much in there that it was not a compliment.

FrOgBeAn