Forever Tormented

I live day in and day out with this constant pain..Will it ever end??

Forever Tormented

Shattered soul
Destroyed by a haunting past
Scattered across the floor 
Like a broken mirror
With sharp pieces
That slice and spear when chosen

You pluck one piece
Holding it in your palm
Simply to be reminded of the horrid truth
So you drop that piece only to select another 
Until all have been seen 
With every piece covered by droplets of crimson
And blood has collected on the ground

The despair sets in 
And you scream in agony
Should have left the pieces alone 
Is your last thought before you crumble to the ground
In a pile of tears, blood, and numbness
Consumed by the darkness’ talons 
Dragging you into the bottomless black hole
Of misery and torment
Where you will suffer for all eternity

Author's Note

What do ya'll think??? Too dark?? Too depressing?? Complete trash?? I want your input.

Reviews

[No name]

Dark, depressing, twisted and kinda angry and I loved it. Nice write definitely not trash.

[¥Miss.¥ §M..]

A little dark, but I like it, though the very last part i'm wondering... why must he/she suffer for all eternity? Does add well to the rest either way just wondering. Very well written :) And just my input, maybe try thinking more pleasant things, realistic, but pleasant. I like your poems, they just all seem so sad... There can't be dark without light.