Shattered Broken Pieces of Glass

Shattered broken pieces of glass..

Oh they knew it would never last.

For she's up.

And he's down.

She's left.

He's right.

She's here.

He's there.

It's so sad.

And now it's shattered broken pieces of glass.

 

Reviews

[Amanda]

Thanks so much everyone it really puts a smile on my face to hear your review!

[Thomas Fleet]

Oh, wow!
That is one amazing poem. I love how you throw in some rhyme and make it flow well. The ending is the kicker that makes this poem so great!
Thanks for sharing.

[Ki]

Oh I love it! Like Jess said you are a great writer. You can write from a deep place. That's great. You just latched on and know how it works.

[Keevan]

very deep and meaningful. you have promise as a writer, Amanda!