Theres days...

Theres days...

Where I feel completely lost.

Alone.

Sad.

 Theres days...

When I feel I don't belong anywhere.

Do I?

Or when the sky just isn't seeming

the blue it usually appears to be.

Or when the grass

really isn't as green

as it was yesterday.

Theres days...

That just don't go right.

and without a fright,

I sit and wonder,

about the thunder,

wondering if it's darkness

is how I'm feeling.

 

 

Reviews

[Amanda]

Thanks guys! Haha :)

[Alexis]

I can relate to this poem. You know that if you ever need to talk to someone, I'm always here! I thought this was well written :3 I'm a fan of your rhyming lol. Usually when I rhyme I just use two words rather than more so I think that's why I like your's so much XD . I agree with Maddy- you should use an extended metaphor! I'm sure it'd be really cool!

[Ki]

I really enjoyed this!!!
Since you like using metaphors, I would suggest writing a whole poem usig an extended metaphor.