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Got a thought fleeing from my mind, 

they always say don't say it if it ain't kind,

it's running quite a distance, 

as if it fears for it's existence,

I may not be so used to spitting truths in a rhyme,

but not trying is not a crime, 

unless you don't stand up and speak it in a short syllable,

and make a stanza worth fill-able,

So don't hate my thought and give it a strike,

better yet hate,

but don't forget to leave a like.

Author's Note

I know some may view ain't as a real word, so I apologize.

Reviews

[hannah]

i use ain't all the time for fun, hehe.
i really like the unique idea of this poem - one of my favorite lines is "they always say don't say it if it ain't kind" - it's true, people say that if you don't have anything nice to say, don't say it, but people speak anyways, don't they? i like how you ended the poem in almost a rebellious manner. great job with this!

[Amazonia_08]

I was poking around, trying to make this sounds light and carefree. Thank you. :)

[hannah]

well, you achieved that! c: again, nice work!

[Julia.Moore]

A passion for haiku poetry began during world literature studies, inspired by its ability to convey profound ideas in a few syllables. Many of these haikus, capturing life's fleeting beauty, are featured in the book Blue Harlequin. Read the full article to explore the beauty of haiku poetry: https://aoidemagazine.com/what-is-haiku-poetry/

[Eagle Cruagh]

My opinion aint much so will just say,
bravo ! You write real good,.
------ Eagle Cruagh

[Arthur Martel]

Interesting poem, I liked it :)

[Benita-Staebell M - Kin..]

This sounds like facebook LOL...


But not everyone is mean
and shows Hate.


Nice work this was a interesting piece.


God bless. Benita

[Amazonia_08]

Thank- you.:)

God bless you too.

[Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet]

You're welcome I was submitting some pieces on helping hearts network for a contest and saw your poem and thought I would come look, it looked interesting. take care. Benita