Ravenous

Ravenous- extreme hunger. for those of you who didn't know!

Hello there sir

how do you do?

I'm quiet fine sir,

just a little bit ravenous.

 

you see I'm not quite human

just look at my claws

and you sir,

are you feeling ravenous?

 

So I say

good day to you sir

for you are no more

and i am no longer

ravenous.

Reviews

[Ariana]

This is a nice poem.

It gives off the creepy 'he just died' feeling in the last stanza when he simply says 'for you are no more/ and I am no longer ravenous.' It's a very interesting way of telling the reader that he is a beast who has just prayed on it's next victim.

[momo]

In memory of little red riding hoods older brother lol

[Jesse Jacques]

wow, that was pretty good. i liked how you used repetition and there are no grammar or spelling mistakes that i can see. awesome job!

[Julie Beth]

wow that was great i would say read it in creative writing club butt, HAPPY HAPPY HAPPY STUFF but you can still read it because no one actually writes happy stuff in that room awesome job :D

[Alexa Tasch]

love it! Ravenous is my FAVORITE word!!!

[L. Catherine]

Nice job Amber! :)

[joshua deathdealer]

Nicely done.

[Grace Catherine C.]

Haha! Funny, so crazy, great one Amber!