Rush of Red

Bleed as you may

Gasp and sigh

Perish or die

Heart is ripped

Soul is gripped

By cryptic truth

In destiny's ruth

Sorry, sorry

I made a foolish plea

Self-inflicted plight

Restless, hopeless flight

Should I let go?

Or go with the flow?

Gardens made in paradise

Rainbows casting on grey skies

Smiles overshadowing grief

Fanciful love to my relief

Sooner or later 

Are sweetness turning bitter

Too high,too far

A despair on a wishing star

Too quick,too fast 

Nothing beautiful can really last

Too long,too deep

It's eternal roads I leap

Once again it's jagged

I'm strained and jaded

Poignant piece of poetry

Sets me to my brittle fantasy

Abrupt and excruciating

In a second,I'm spontaneously bleeding

Author's Note

As you may understand

Reviews

[aine]

It was a good read. Just that in parts you tried a bit too hard to rhyme the words and the impact kind of reduced. But good work overall