Here

Like a marriage vow

There's so much I want to do

So much I want to see

So much I want to feel

A little ill with dread

Since the world sleeps on a flimsy bed

Mornings might bail on me

All things wished become a buried story

But here now
Right at the present,life does allow
I am as young as every second
My heart can steadily respond
Here now while I love you
It's like my primordial dream came true

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[Bacchus]

like a marriage vow...
glad you put that in
"All things wished become a buried story"- I like that line
We do have to die and die again to be true... and we can find our dreams do come to fruition.

I like the line- young as every second... still thinking the rest through.

[papermush08]

Hello there, I appreciate your comment so much, especially your interpretation and understanding.read moreHello there, I appreciate your comment so much, especially your interpretation and understanding.
I didn't mean to write this like a marriage vow *inserts a little laugh* but when I looked at it again, it did sound like a vow.
Anyway I feel like I have to be raw, well excuse my sentiments here :)
This writing was inspired by my recent thoughts about the constant happenings in the world, the sudden tragic events,you know when you think about someone you love and there are a lot of things you want to tell them, things you want to do with them but you're worried each day because we can't predict life. The only resolution to that burdensome thought is to consider the present moment, to be grateful enough that you have come to find love that makes every moment of your life a place you feel safe, that's all you have to think about for a moment :)