Delay

For http://www.writerscafe.org/contests/Short-Note/14265/, describing a lot of my moments. Just a short little representation of me and procrastination.

For the past many years,
My mind told me to do everything.
Yet, here I am years later,
And all those everythings, are now nothings.

No matter how much I thought,
Or how much I cried,
Or how much I spoke my feelings,
Nothing came out from no action.

Reviews

[Darkest Rose]

This is an amazing Poem.I wouldn't change anything about it and it is more my style of poetry compared to one of the earlier ones I read.'No matter how much I thought,Or how much I cried,Or how much I spoke my feelings,Nothing came out from no action' That is the best part for me,you end it well and you keep the flow going from line to line.Fab write :)

[kayla]

Great poem, and I'm sure everybody could relate. Procrastination always seems to sneak up on us, doesn't it? :P anyhoo, nice poem.

[Seshat Nidaba]

I think your logic is supra-rational. Very philosophical and meaningful, I appreciate the wisdom behind these words. I am now a fan.

[Victoria PoetryBunny]

I like this a lot,describes what's hard to describe it seems like... love the second stanza. Really nice.

[sugar]

wow this was short and kinda bitter sweat...I LOVED IT hahahah good job

[Alex Figueroa]

very sad, it made me want to get up and accomplish something, this piece is inspiring in a way, so I'm going to do something tomorrow to honor the underlining message behind this work! again bravo!